this felt like a spell.. soft, aching, and full of memory. you captured the sea as something ancient and alive, like a mirror for girlhood, power, and silence. i’ll be thinking about the line "I, too, would glimmer if it meant I could be loved by the world." <3 beautifully written!!
it’s evocative and poetic, like a memory trying to surface through silt. I like the cosmic connection of the stars through the sea. It’s like a deepening of perception, a return to something primal or celestial. Very nice
So smooth and beautifully written. It took me to a scene where a girl living in a small town by the sea, writing on her porch as she looks up and is greeted by the sea.
this felt like a spell.. soft, aching, and full of memory. you captured the sea as something ancient and alive, like a mirror for girlhood, power, and silence. i’ll be thinking about the line "I, too, would glimmer if it meant I could be loved by the world." <3 beautifully written!!
stop i’m gonna cry thank you so much
thank uuu for sharing 🤍
this is beautiful
thank you so much angel 😭🫶
this is truly so beautiful
thank you soooo much you are so kind 😭🫶
Beautiful and delicate writing. Thank you
I love this!!!
I love the subtle rhyming! It adds such a beautiful and almost ethereal feeling
https://open.substack.com/pub/yourownawakening/p/an-seala-the-sea-spirit-who-remembers?r=1fax0j&utm_medium=ios
it’s evocative and poetic, like a memory trying to surface through silt. I like the cosmic connection of the stars through the sea. It’s like a deepening of perception, a return to something primal or celestial. Very nice
So smooth and beautifully written. It took me to a scene where a girl living in a small town by the sea, writing on her porch as she looks up and is greeted by the sea.
I loved it.
so lovely, your words soothe.
wow, this was beautiful. it felt like saltwater nostalgia haha. so pure and beautiful. thank you for sharing this!! xx